All Comments on 'Carried Away'

Was the husbands name originally Adam? This nsme pops randomly I'm paragraph 17. The story is ok but severely rushed. No character development and somehow goes suddenly from oral to full on sex without clarity of what's going on

I think the title is quite pertinent. You have rushed through the story. As previously mentioned from oral to full blown in a matter of lines - while the ladies did not even take off their pants? not sure. Plus i noted that Steve suddenly became Adam.

I liked the story line even if it was a bit carried away