All Comments on 'Carried Away Ch. 03'

A refreshingly plausible take on submission, and very well-written to boot. I'm going to see what else you've written. :)

hay wounderful submission only have one favour to ask you must right a next part when she finaly takes her fully and maybe they move in or it all goes bad and she ends up getting with her boss one of the two, but anyway wounderful top marks 10 out of 10 keep it up

Fantastic story. Each chapter has been better than the one befor. Please write the next chapter soon as it has been too long since this one was posted.

5 stars again. Can't wait for more. Thanks for putting this out there.

I sure hope you haven't stopped this story because I really love it! I'll be checking up to see if there are any new chapters.... I hope you'll update soon! :)

Do hope that you write more as the plot can go in many directions. Gail could really dominate her play toy over many chapters.

I love the mix of romance and lust . I adore the way she submits to her lover's whims...serving her and how she is left not knowing just what the future holds. Very sexy...

A great story. And is there anything panned with her boss?