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than we've come to expect from the sub-continent - although the theme was a pretty familiar one. I just hope this isn't going down the usual path of submission and the 'heroine' becoming an available slut while her husband allows it all to happen.

Because of the writing I'll risk giving it 3* - but I hope there may be something with a bit of originality in it yet to come.

I'm assuming this will end up a cuck tale since its Indian. I sure as hell hope not but we shall see!?

"Nuff said!

Except there is enough to tell that it will be wordy!

Interesting so far... eagerly waiting for more.

hope to read more of this stories soon

Yet another good one... I hope part 2 is equally engrossing.....

Superb ......couldn't stop taking off eyes .....and the first thing to get relieved is a mastrubation

So nice/exciting to read erotic stories from the Indian cultural perspective. As a mature American professional I have worked with ladies of various cultural backgrounds. I must say the Indian ladies have given me food for thought.

Let me say that your use of English is very, very good. That said, the idiomatic discrepancies seem perfect.

You make me wish to have opportunities for indiscriminate pleasures with an open minded Indian woman.

Keep up the good work.

~Unshodrgs

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