All Comments on 'Carson Evolved Ch. 12'

Amazing chapter . cant wait for what happens next

Wow....

With so much happening, I don't think your initial plan to bundle up in even 10 chapters would do any justification with the story. So my advice to you is to stop thinking about chapters. Keep your thoughts coming and we will be with you all the way.

Realky enjoying the story.

Please add a brief reference when characters first appear in each chapter. With so many people it is impossible to recall who was who. Eg Oriri (?) Was mentioned near the end, and is having his baby. Who was she? The name was something like that.

I definitely caught the quote from Luther. Gave me a solid chuckle.

Dialing the tension up to 11, I see. Well done. I'm hungry for more.

What happened to Aria??

I can’t believe anyone else hasn’t brought this up yet.

Stargate Atlantis and the stupid Orrii and their book of origin.

I love how you are building up the tension and trying to wrap together a bunch of open story lines at the same time. Keep up the great work!

You are just full of surprises and I am going on for more! Thanks!

"They lived in the save town"

Same town?