All Comments on 'Carvella Ch. 04'

This is by far the best part of this story..the character development of linda is very, very well along, and her actions are so logical and real. who wouldn't google up someone to check them out, who wouldn't lie to themselves as to what their real goal in life was, and who wouldn't fail to protect themselves in their own home from the prying eyes of their kids? No one, and that is the beauty of this work. It is real and believable. Very good..keep it up but please increase the speed of your releases between chapters...far too long for this one....

glad to see you back hope to see more soon

nice! mmmm more :-)