All Comments on 'Case of the Murdered Chessplayer Ch. 04'

Melina continues her sluttish character Don is well rid of her, Todd is whoring her off to her buddies then, what a nice way to treat your aunt.

A fab story loving these and more to come........Great

Because he is required to be a nemeses to Don. It’s boring when you know he will always get away.

Really, does anyone leave their shoes on during sex?

The laws of physics, inertial and momentum, still apply in your universe. Letting Ned get away again with his super natural escapes has taken it's toll.

It's too hard to continue suspending my disbelief; I can't keep going with this series.

Get some new villains going! Let the old ones receive justice!

Jeanine sure is trying to act like she isn't trash. And what is with the infatuation with Jack Burke between these women?

Jeanine cuckolds Tim with Jack, Tim nearly kills himself because of it, he dies saving her life...and she names the baby after Jack. In any other story, she'd be an antagonist, abd everyone would acknowledge what an evil, narcissistic, psychopathic bitch she was. In this story, in this genre? She's a beautiful treasure. My god. How do people rate these so highly?! Every single character belongs in a wood chipper!

Good chapter but seen nothing to redeem Melina

*****Thanks for the read.