All Comments on 'Case of the Pilfering Professor'

by brynhild84

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
very minor error

"Not yet, sweaty, not yet," she cooed into my mouth

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I think you meant "sweety" not "sweaty." Although given the circumstances, he may have been a little sweaty with her rubbing so close...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
better

Better done as most stories here around pretending to be "erotic". This story IS erotically.

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