All Comments on 'Castaway Love Ch. 01'

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I wish that I was with a bronzed hunk right now I would have a boner and he would respond .Look forward to the next episode get it going please

Ok This is a good start. I love it so far.

It is like a dream to be cast away with a muscular hunk. I am sure even he is straight he will require a 🕳 to put his cock in and get his load off! And there is no one apart from Steve who would be happy to offer himself to the man for use. I was hoping some more details regarding the man’s body and his cock...and balls..I hope next chapter will fulfil my desires! Thanks for the start

Like the previous comment, I'd love to be with the bronzed naked hairy-chested man with the impressive endowment, ready to service him and be serviced by him in the cold of the night.

You have a great beginning and a story worthy of further development and details. Anxiously awaiting to know what happens between Steven and the captain's son. Hope they have some sexual fun!

And he doesn’t wear underwear, hmmmm. Good start. Let’s see if Steve pops a boner in his sleep. After all, it’s only natural. Maybe a little wet dream along the way, or some assistance in the night? All kinds of lovely scenarios come to mind! Just makes me giddy to think of some. Great start. Can’t wait for the next chapter, and all of the juicy details! Fun!

I'm a bit surprised that Lit published this, I've had two short stories rejected, because they were too short - didn't have enough words. I ended up combining them, with two subtitles, and got them published.

As for the material, it's a good start, and I'll be looking for the next segment. This could end up to be a very good story.

Great start, I can't wait to see where you go with this story. There are all kinds of possibilities that can develop here on this island. Even if Steve is straight he will get horny sometime before long and there is only one person to turn too for relief.