All Comments on 'Castaway Mermaid Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I like it. Can't wait for the next part. Great job. I read a lot on here and get bored easy. Not bored now.

RedMockersRedMockersover 2 years ago

Different. Glad her name is not Ariel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good job thrilling fantasy story so far,

PurplefizzPurplefizzabout 2 years ago

So we’ve effectively got a mash up of Robinson Crusoe and Snow White? Fwiw I wish the author had explained that she has the option of legs, “show don’t tell” is great writing maxim, but a bit more detail in the “show” would have helped.

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