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All Comments on 'Castle in the Clouds Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A very,very good start. i hope we don have to wait too long for the next chapter

des911des911over 2 years ago

Very good start with plenty of scope. Looking forward to the next episode.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a freak show.

Xzy89c1Xzy89c1over 2 years ago

A woke story. Hard pass

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was a lovely read. Looking forward to more. Really love the way you handled the guy's transness - realistic and subtle.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved it. The characters both feel like realistic people, and I think this is the best trans guy story on here tbh

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well written, if a bit wooden.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

very well written, and good story building!

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Follow along as I write "Castle in the Clouds," my novel about a paid escort turned housekeeper who becomes entangled in the mystery of her new lover's late wife.

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