by MayorReynolds
@Anonymous,
"Delusional crap for chronic masterbaters"
Then I achieved my goal! Thanks for your feedback!
This was an enjoyable read but I’d love to read about mom&daughter and dad&son having a play with each other and fucking. I think I came almost as much as one of the characters reading this.
Okay, so I'm fairly certain that the word you should have used instead of 'flag' is 'pennant':
"He'd put up flags with various sports team logos."
As a general rule, I detest family orgy stories. But you must have caught me in a rare mood. But I was still bored with it by the time I got to the top of the last page. I think that I was enjoying the fact that Madison was not upset that her children were sleeping together. Her approval kept me interested. But when the sex just kept going on and on with no ending in sight, I was ready to move on. 1/5
You lost me when the girl went to wake up her father. It was fairly good until then.
I liked the story gave it 4 stars but it was a little to much and to fast!!!!!!!!!!
Ok you went to far with bringing in the dad the story would have been 10× better if you would have left it between the mom and son and even better then that if you would have explained how and why it started you know actually made it a story by giving some details instead of wham bam and done