All Comments on 'Cat Nipped Ch. 05'

by DorKnight

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Dont_miss_meDont_miss_meover 7 years ago
Excellent way to end...

Tara and Jennifer's story. I'm looking forward to more of this.

Oh and it was good, but not great so I'm only gonna give it 5 stars...

Dutch_EroticaDutch_Eroticaover 7 years ago
Great story

I was actually reading one of the other chapters earlier this week and thought I hope this story isn't dead and here you are. I loved the dynamic between the main characters and the sex scenes were hot. I really enjoyed it. One tiny tiny thing half the text is underlined, maybe you could contact someone from literotica to fix it

DorKnightDorKnightover 7 years agoAuthor
Sorry Peeps!

Just found out that half my story is underlined. Arrggghh! Wrote most of the story on my kindle using a knock-off word app then merged docs with my PC. So annoying when my tech doesn't line up seamlessly!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Scott vs Mike

Before when we met Sydney she was with Scott. Now it's suddenly Mike.

Otherwise, aside from the already mentioned underlines, the story was good. I am curious why nearly an entire year has passed but no removal of the underlines.

LyingolferLyingolferover 6 years ago
A little continuity

First off EXCELLENT series, and I'm looking forward to more vignettes. My observation concerns Syd, Mike/Scott and Tara's relationship. When Jen was introduced to them originally Tara said they had been friends since grade school. If I'm not mistaken I thought I remembered reading the Ska'a had only been on Earth for 6 years......

texguy73texguy73almost 5 years ago
Great story!

Need updates! So much more story to tell!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Fantastic, but

Please stop calling it a taco. I beg of you.

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