All Comments on 'Catalyst Pt. 02'

Keep it going----Wonderful story!!

Loved the story, keep up great work!

WOW ! Great chapter and great writing. I think the story is very well planned and unfolding one step at a time. I love the way you write ... you make it look real. Now I can hardly wait for the next part. Voted you another 5 stars.

Becoming more interesting and exciting. Would be interesting if Dylan suspected something when he smells their house reeking of sex.

Jenna is stupid, are these sugar daddies clean?

She seems to fuck anyone. She fucked Leo and hinted she fucked another guy.

What the hell is wrong with Rich, happy his daughter is into prostitution ????

Happy for her to inveigle his other daughter into prostituting herself as well???

I think he’d prostitute his own wife as well if he could. He’s seriously fucked up.

He’s living his life vicariously thru the sexual adventures of his family. He’s not right in the head.

I note no other comments. Hmmm!!!!

Scores 3/5

Loving it so far waiting for brother to join them!! 5Stars

Pronouns maybe? Stop using "I" when it should be "me."