All Comments on 'Catamaran Confusion'

by Emory_Striger

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
catamaran confusion

Hot start and a good premise, but three days to get nude? A smart man would have stripped the first time they said they'd planned to be nude all week.

So the exciting story turns into a long slog.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

There's a distinct lack of sex in your stories.

TheBusinessManTheBusinessManalmost 4 years ago
I liked it

Forgive me, I do enjoy your writing style and your stories but this was a little like an R rated Hallmark Channel movie. One of the three girls, if not the captain, would have been in his cabin the first night.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I liked the power play, with the guy pretending to be some ingénu

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