All Comments on 'Catching Corrina'

Very nice, well written... I am frustrated to not know the identity of her Tormentor!

what about ya tell us if it is only part of a fucking story.

This is a good start to the story, assuming there are 2-3 chapters to go.

I do hope this doesn't go through chapter after chapter of forcing her to do odd things and eventually perverted sex.

let it hang it is done. finished.

I could have done without the bowel movement, though.

This works well as a story on its own. One can be left to imagine her life after this. However, once you described the intense eyes watching over a book, you introduced the Master and now I feel you should add to this story...

A very well written story very good liked it alot

An errorless story. What a change.

I'll be looking for followup.

Courage? Got any?

Please post more of the same...

gressing games are for childred and whores should be whores and stay on the street corners.

Let it stand; it speaks volumes and needs nothing else.

Exquisite prose with superb word choices, marvelous sentence construction and wonderful pacing. The characters are finely drawn, and the author opens a detailed portal into Corinna's soul. She's wicked and selfish, controlling and manipulative. That she's forced to submit to her blackmailer's desires both irritates and inflames her. It's wonderful study in contrasts that shows the author's talent in creating realistic characters.

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Corinna's lack of morality makes her fascinating. It is her wickedness that attracts us and keeps us interested. That the author concluded this tale without a conclusive ending allows us to fantasize about what might have happened to her. Perhaps her blackmailer corrupted her completely and stole her from her husband. Perhaps her husband was behind the blackmail after all and ended up divorcing her. Or perhaps he sees an opportunity to break her will and make her submit at least to him. It's delicious storytelling that tantalizes the mind.

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Thank you for a story very well-told.

the tables are turned on her, and she has lost control. she is a deceitful person and deserves this, plus more. her position, standing etc should follow.

change happens, but she never considered this

Only citizens of Brits could be this useless ! Those gutless mindless wimps have ALWAYS something to hide.

That is why you never see any info in their bio. Typical sicko nation !

A tantalisingly wonderful tale. Thank you

It was like free falling the entire story. I was taken in the moment and pace of the writing Very Cool Thanks for sharing with us

and look what you have. TK U MLJ LV NV

Just like the cheating cunt in the story. GARBAGE

"... and the pain her husband would feel..."

Because NOW, after how many lovers, after how many times she cheated on him... after doing things like going on a BALCONY to have sex with a lover... NOW she worries about the pain her husband would feel...

J should push her further and further down the rabbit hole, doing their best to never let it become something she's comfortable with... until she completely breaks or is found out.

Is "J" a friend (or relative) of her husband's punishing her...?

Does she really NOT know her husband as well as she thinks...? After all, if she's successfully hiding all of this fucking around from him maybe he IS hiding his knowledge from her... Or maybe the knowledge of her cheating has LITERALLY broken him (schizophrenic) and the husband she knows isn't the one USING her.

Is it an enemy of hers...? Trying to crush her as thoroughly as possible before FINALLY providing it all to her husband...

Enquiring minds want to know. .. =)

1* for: 1st - She was a cheating wife with no remorse; 2nd - To write a story like this and never finish it, is like cooking and then throw away the food...

....needs to be thrown out

And the point was?

If you're going to write this kind of shit.....FINISH IT!

...waste of time,

In the years I have been reading and writing erotica I have noticed increasingly coarse and witless comments, paralleling, perhaps, the same changes taking place in our culture. Many here feel entitled to free entertainment at the expense of someone elses labor with no sign of gratitude. Indeed, they very freely spit vitriol, compounding their miserable ingratitude. Such comments are as dog poop along the trail. Attention must be paid but it's easily avoided.

Regarding the story, it's a superior piece of writing. Too bad the author is long gone.

Tenn you happy with your rant now???? Too funny, only thing superior about this writing was that it was only two pages of wasted time. The writing was OK nothing special and the the story itself was scattered and uninteresting.

I think any woman who willingly cheats on her husband, no matter what the reason is, should be pimped out and turned into a prostitute.

She's already a stone whore, might as well charge for it.

An old story that doesn't seem finished.

Ugh?

OK, the setup was fine, but why didn’t you tell the rest of the story?