by SallyG
I thought the story was great! Erotic - arousing - hot!
The only dispointment was there wasn't more of the same.
I have always been curious and fasinated by incest,
specially mother/son. You seem to present it from the
female side, which a male cannot do, as he does not know
how the female feels - mentally, physically and sexually.
Keep writing, you have talent! As I said, I'm curious
about incest. sure would like to email with you about
it.
man i got the munchies like a motherfucker after reading this story
Sally, great story. Short, sexual, in your face storytelling. Loved it. Just like that 70's disco song, 'More More More' CG
WHEN A GOOD WRITER COME ALONG,YOU WANT MORE.PLEASE WRITE MORE CATCHING MOM.
This is such a taboo subject yet it happens more often than we think. Presenting it from a woman's standpoint is new to Literotica. I hope you continue with many more in this vane, you do write well.
Please, give us more. What a beautiful story of mother-son love.
home keeping her promises. Please write about after Dad arrives home. I almost wrote "after Dad comes home" but maybe arrives is the better word.
Great story, sexy, dirty and very SIMULATING. I'm looking forward to reading it again. But it's not long enough. Keep writing more stories Sally. Thanks
dan and his mother one of the best story.finish the story.
I love jacking off to hot incest stories between mother and son but you made this story so realistic It was so refreshing to stoke my cock to such realisitic and plausible descriptions of mother and son fucking so sponteous and unreharesd I had one of the best cums ive ever had from jacking off to incest stories You should write a lot more stories like this one
open mom up to new world as well as heather.bang them long and hard.
Start to finish, totally well done. Congratulations on such a fine job with chapters one and two. Since most great reads contain more than two chapters, I hope this means we will soon be hearing more about Melanie and Danny? I love how the mom knew that she should use some sort of protection to keep from getting pregnant, yet seemed absolutely thrilled to have her son's bare cock drilling in and out and to have his cum blasted deep inside her.
Keep it up this is the best mother/son story too come along for the longest Time For a young female writer you are one of the best on literotica You should post a picture so your fans can idenify with you
Really hot story. You captured the mood beautifully, especially the fucking and when he came with his cock buried in his mother's cunt. My cock was as hard as a rock by then and I was pumping away on it. Thanks for the pleasure. Keep writing like this.
........he stuck his finger in his mother's shithole
It was a good story and kept me wanting to read more. There were a couple of points, however, that didn't ring true. Unless I missed something, I didn't think seeing his mother naked in the bathroom was justification for his blackmail. I also didn't feel that the mother "fell in love" with the son as much as she deluded and resigned herself to his blackmail.
This story was absolutely wonderful! Sally G has to write a followup with the great descriptive talent she has. the aspect of these young, college age guys taking care of their hot moms beacause the husband is too distracted is very real today, I believe. Next, let's see how little clothes Melanie wears when Dan's around and let's hope she get done in the ass by her son.
It is very interesting story I have enjoyed each and every word of it .you should continue writing incest stories
It's been a long while since this story came out. It says to be continued. Wasa wondering when and if you were going to bring out another cghapter to this story.
you end with "to be continued" and yet nothing, for two of you stories. what happened, why have you stopped writing? you have a real talent and must continue.
...have the promise keeper bring home some 'real' men for her to be intro'd to...BLACK ADONNIS's...extreme in ALL dimensions... for her to realize what REAL men are all about!!..with the ole man absolutely NOT having a clue as to what is really going on...have him give them 'open visitation' rights to their home..of which the 'HOT MOM' takes MORE THAN FULL ADVANTAGE OF...with sonny blending in as required as a filler...this one could go places...with MANY chapters...YOU GO GIRL!!!XXXXXXXXXXOXOXOXO;)))..KNOCK 'EM DEAD with your performances...show them how a white nympho can possess/be possessed by the black vampires, and possess in return...XXX
you are undefeated,all your stories i have read are great.give us more of your stories.you're missed.
This story is very topical, as it describes what is happening today to many thousands, probably tens of thousands, of mothers and their sons. Dad is neglecting his wife, while her cuntal needs are greater than ever. Lucky for Mom, living right in the house there's a good looking, well built young male programmed by Nature to bring his demanding dick and his mother's needy twat together--her own son! Like most all young guys Danny's been obsessed with his mother's cunt for a long time. When he happens to find her naked in the bathroom, he finally sees her lovely twat and is stunned. Before he leaves his mother notices the massive hard on in his pants, and wonders how big it is? Dan tells his mother, I gotta see your muff again, I gotta fuck you, Mom! He hauls out his big stiff prick to show his mother, and now she's stunned--the biggest she's ever seen! Dan is a star athlete, a wrestler, and he's used to getting what he wants. In bed a few hot kisses and his hard cock on her ass get his Mom started. Danny pushes his big dick up his mother's dripping muff and unloads his big balls up his own birth canal. Dan has his Mom suck him off, she licks and laps his balls, and the boy turns it into a 69. Another son has started on his career of happy motherfucking!
This was a fucking great story. I cant wait for the next in the series. Keep up the great work.
Since they have found how good they are together, I hope that they decide that she should have his baby and allow herself to become pregnant by Danny.Thanks for the sexually hot story.......Rich
Hot story SallyG - she's certainly one hot milf, and she sure appreciates her sons big cock. We need this to progress some more, after all you did promise a part 3. I can foresee some hot anal action here, the slut's ripe for it, just look at how easily she fucked her son and what a greedy and needy cunt she's got!
Please continue the story. What you have done so far, whets the appetite for what may be coming
Sally, this is one of the best stories on here. The careful seduction and manipulation of the mother by the son just so he can fill her hot milf cunt with his iron hard cock is excellent. She's a cock hungry slut and can't get enough of his big boy cock. You're one superb writer, but please, where's the follow on? Does he breed her?
THIS HAS TO BE ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I READ. NICE AND EASY FLOW TO IT. ITS ONE THAT NEEDS TO BE COMPLETED. YOU ARE VERY GOOD AT THIS. ITS BEEN TO LONG FOR YOU,PLEASE CONT. YOUR WRITING. THANKS FOR WHAT YOU HAVE GIVING US.
Please continue with this story, I loved it. Keep up the good work ;-D
Lovely story, raw, erotic, sexy. "Mom" sounds like a lovely lady......and your son the perfect match. I find my fingers and pussy juicy and still in need.....where is "Danny" when I need him......Hugs please don'g stop the stories coming (and me cumming too) Nadine
Nice that mom was very reluctant at first, and I admire Danny for pressing on and not taking no for an answer. I hope though she doesn't get pregnant as I'd like to read that they keep fucking a while. I jerked off twice to this story. MMM! What a great feeling!
WHY WOULD ANYONE PUT THE WORDS TO BE CONTINUED, KNOWING THEY WOULD NEVER END IT. THIS IS THE KIND OF PERSON WHO SHOULD STOP WRITING. ALSO THOSE CHAPTER ONES AND NEVER A CHAPTER TWO EVEN THE PART ONES AND NO PART TWO. IT'S NOT FAIR TO THE READERS, THIS IS NOT ONLY ON LITEROTICA BUT ON ALL SITES OF THIS TYPE. GOOD STORIES NEED A PROPER ENDING . A FAN OF LITEROTICA. LAROC OF AGES
Ah yes, the death knell of a story. You left us hanging about mom getting pregnant; how addicted to each other they might become; what dumb ass daddy really was doing; and a whole new twist as to maybe the girlfriend becoming a third party. Oh well.
Great first 2 chapters. I can't wait to see what else they do together.
5 stars. The part when Melanie put on her sexy glasses, trying to search for a condom... so damn hot!
From time to time I come back and read both your chapters and I still love it.
I just wish that one day you would return and write a final chapter.
This one is a very good story. 5 stars. Wish she had finished this story.
My favorite line in the story=>As they fucked Melanie looked over and saw her panties lying on the floor-she stared at them as her son continued to pound into her welcoming muff. That segment causes me to erupt every time I read this story. One of the top stories all time in my opinion. Please submit so more.