All Comments on 'Catching Penny'

You're off to a good start. Keep it up.

Pretty good plot, but you should make more suspence. While I enjoyed it the reading was very abrupt; prolong the pleasure man :-)

Cheers!

learn that ass is spelled wit two (s)'s...

Good story but the grammer leaves a lot to be desired, you definately need to continue.

now i have to go look for the other parts. keep writing.