by Sharethebinds1
Not much rational thought. Narrative next to zero.
The lonely monster seems affectionate and friendly to him, but what happens to him now that she's in his house? Will she follow him to work, or even let him leave? I'd say that ambiguous ending was perfect for a more erotic horror story.
Build up and reveal of the monster could've been executed a bit better. Moreso with the build-up; would've been cool to see him explore what the monster's realm was like further. He went through a few rooms or so, from what I could gather?
Good premise with a somewhat average description of erotic events, but I can definitely say your stories are getting better.