All Comments on 'Catherine Ch. 01'

by Rgmoore

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Not very erotic

Maybe chapter two will evolve into something better where Michael understands you have needs he can’t meet and discovers deep down he’s not disgusted but turned on by yournaffsirnwith Robert. Then again, maybe you’ll just regale us with the sad ruin of your marriage.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Setup misleads

You setup a situation where she was likely to start looking around with no clue she already had started the affair. I found it disjointed.

PlanerguyPlanerguyalmost 6 years ago
Dumb

Really? Time to dump the cunt,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
What type cigarette do you smoke?

Oh Marlboro. And they are white!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Example of really bad writing

I felt ashamed for cheating on the father of my children, but my lust for black cock was too strong.

Hahahahahahahaha.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Total trash

I'm so beautiful I can have any man I want. Robert is the janitor at my bank. He is 5'8" and 321lbs, but he has a bbc. He also has herpes and early stage syphilis, but he does have a bbc. He has an 8th grade education, and barely speaks coherently, but he has a bbc. I will lose my husband and family, but I want the bbc. Bull shit!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hope it ends

In divorce and her and her lover dying a slow death Aids Auto accident A sling fall from a balcony onto a concrete sidewalk sounds great also

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Story sucks

Don't think much of this story. She needs to realize what she is about to lose and how her life is getting ready to change......all for the bad.

handaJizzhandaJizzalmost 6 years ago

Marlboros may well be white, but lung cancer is black

A profound lesson for all

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Done & Done!!!

It's over. Maybe some back and forth what ifs, trying to adjust BUT - hubby will take the kids, she'll try BF living for a while which goes on and deteriorates to who knows whar/

Done & Done....No going back!

Too easy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Well now you have to work your hubby porn movie interracial ,black dildo make up a friend that is going black ,see how it plays out who knows he might let you try black again with permission 'you know only once in a while to spice things up good luck

timrivtimrivalmost 6 years ago

‘I wondered what the future of my marriage held”

Answer:

None I would assume.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
really?

If this is true, which I doubt, she is a loser cunt. She'll never learn until it's too late.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Maybe too late

Maybe if she had suggested a threesome during foreplay she might have inspired her husband to want to watch her having sex with another man and if she added a big black cock to the fantasy she could be enjoying her lover and her marriage. Now it looks like she will lose her husband and probably the kids. She better hope that she lives in a no fault divorce State.

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