All Comments on 'Catheter for Hubby Pt. 01'

Please don't write part 2.

It seems that English is not your first language. Too many mistakes and the story keeps jumping tenses+persons.

The basic plot is intriguing, since it can lead into multiple directions but you need an editor's help to improve the flow of the story, while suggesting erotic content, and to edit your English. Literotica has a list of editors who are available.