All Comments on 'Cathy Ch. 02'
by Mikro
- 4 Comments
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoThis really is a great story as well as dialogue. You've done a wonderful job and I truly hope you continue Cathy's stories for a long LONG TIME.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoIt's is not the same as its,
your is not the same as you're,
and you cant just shove commas and apostrophes in anywhere you feel like it... how in HELL is this in top stories?
Anonymousover 13 years agoNot a bad piece. However, the intensity was repeatedly ruined by the incorrect use of "there" and 's in the wrong places. A bit of proofreading or self education about grammar would assist the writer.
Anonymousover 8 years agoThe erotica text pleasures our senses not just for men but also the ladies. Have not all readers of this text been touched sensually ... our fantasies have reached a new level of self-contiousness ... so are we not a better people of society where we can honestly put ourselves into these characters or is more complicated.
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