All Comments on 'Cathy taken'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Just one question. Was she half Japanese? I think you made that point a bit too often which only detracted from the story. Nice try, no cigar.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Author basically lets us know, for roughly 20 times, that race is more important to them than a plot. Don't worry, we figured that out, very quickly. And that last sentence pretty much erased any chance of this even being memorable.

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