All Comments on 'Catie's Night Off Pt. 01'

Very erotic but very much to the point as well.

Hotter than hell! Had a hard on after the second paragraph. Can't wait for the next chapter. Just an absolutely great story for a first time effort on LI

A very sexy story with nicely drawn characters, but the ending was extremely abrupt and unexpected. Definitely left this reader wanting more please!

Outstanding! Looking forward to more. Hot af, and balances well between realistic (Catie accidentally using her work voice at the bar) and fantastical (not worrying about STIs or pregnancy).

Mmm-hmm. Okaaayyy.

"leant "

Lean T?

Lent?

The tower of Pisa leant?

Well, you got me, Skippy.

Very fast ending. Maybe Mommy walked in and you had to hit SEND before you closed your lap, never mind your laptop.

What should have been a 4 takes a hit to the double-digit negative zone or maybe it is negatively leant.

Good start, there must be a part 2 and 3 surely? Hope so....