All Comments on 'Catwomen Caught Ch. 02: After the Party'

Susie still supports her friend, and still blames Greg for being unfair and trying to force her to make "an impossible choice".

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Yeah, it's all Greg's fault. I notice that at no point did his wife say that Susie said to her, "Have you tried to talk to him?" Nope, Susie went to the 'get her drunk and have sex with her to make her feel better' route instead.

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And who loves you more? The person who is willing to take only part of your love or the person who wants all of your love? So she threw away the person who loved her completely for the person that was sharing her love with her. Good choice.

I'll start by stating "I'm not Harry, but I didn't like this story much, either".

Both of the main characters exhibited "flawed" spousal principles, so I found it hard to choose one to side with and "root for".

I also had a bit of trouble (in places) with figuring out who in hell was supposed to be doing the narrating. I also had some trouble discerning which character was speaking some lines during a couple of the conversations, especially when the same character spoke several lines (I think) before the other character replied. My usual cue for helping me determine this ("new paragraphs" for "different" speakers) didn't work here, as there were new paragraphs all over the place, often where there shouldn't have been.

Anyway, I don't think POV switching works very well in a short story, especially when there are more than a couple of characters. A reader (me, specifically) just doesn't get enough time to become familiar with the various characters (sometimes even their names) before the story is over.

That being said, this story has good plot bones, so with a little more polishing before submission, it would have likely been much better.

I didn't care for it much. It was proficiently written, but the story wasn't enjoyable in the slightest. Alicia was a horrible, horrible person - a true taker who wasn't giving back and certainly wasn't willing to deal with the results from her actions in order to keep her husband. 2*

Good story .... fyi lots of errors in this 3rd part where should be Greg not Richard.

Uhhh...sheiterally had sex with and was cheating WITH her best friend. You cannot save a marriage AND still keep spending all your free time with the person you were fucking and cheating with!!

What a stupid bitch this wife was. Like moron level of thinking.

I hope she reads this story some day and some of these comments and then dies old and alone. Ain't no other normal man whose gonna put up with "I love you honey and want to be married to you, but you have to accept the fact that I like to occasionally sleep with my best friend and her moron husband for fun. And I won't give up that relationship for you. You just have to accept that."

Good luck with that. Seriously. What a dumb woman.

Read this a couple of times. The author has the last word and is 100% correct. If they had reunited it was only a matter of time when she’d do it again!

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A well told tale, with a very plausible outcome.

11/10!!!!!

Quite the LW's tale. One of Javmor79's best. Terrific story telling. *****

Susie still supports her friend, and still blames Greg for being unfair and trying to force her to make "an impossible choice". In my opinion, if that choice was impossible then Alicia wasn't in the marriage as much as a wife should be.

=====> Alicia had a choice at redemption and reconciliation but chose poorly. She didn't belong in a marriage. The two times of adultery was bad enough, but her refusing to stop seeing Susie and Dominic is beyond the pale. She will have her friends but lost Greg forever. She did not deserve him and suspect she will eventually wither and die alone. Sad. Strongly suspect Susie is a bad influence on her. If you have problems with your married sex life, never talk to friends. Only a therapist or counselor, maybe your parents. Never anyone else. Too many so-called "friends" see it as an opportunity. It is bad that she wrnt back a second time not drunk. But her inability to put her husband d first with everything on the line, means she is self centered and has serious behavioral problems.

Attracted initially to your writing after reading your series “Free” — unfaithful wife and husband who felt emasculated. This piece bears only superficial resemblance — story is all about the harmed/wounded husband while the why/wherefore’s of her (unfaithful wife) behavior never examined as you did in “Free”. Despite emotional moments/rants she is little more than a foil, almost a caricature — not exaggerated/comical, but 1-dimensional. In the end, she is better off without him.

I love it!

However, I was not quite convinced by the claim that it's real.

My view: the claim was blown out of the water in the second part, when the blowhard Harry appeared.

How could he text 'Greg'? it's not his real name. Even if it was (which it wasn't because he's not even a real person), texts can only be sent to a number known to the sender. At least Harry is a real person, he seems to know everything about everything but he doesn't have the number of every person in the USA.

Still loved the story. I'd give it 5 stars, but there doesn't seem much point after it's been available for eight years.

Note to author: OK prove I'm wrong - send me a photo of the Dominic shaped hole. Must have been one.

It certainly makes you think and I agree with the author, by her not being able to choose, she was choosing, he is definitely better off without the skank⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

For sure he had the right ,obligation at best if he was stupid enough to trust his future time on earth to her. He had to demand a choice.

She didn't choose him. Of course she was already beyond getting the chance to choose for most.

Thought provoking. Well written.

A good follow up, it poses some interesting questions, it probes into many a mind and asks us to view our own thoughts, nicely written

What did she expect him to do when she told him she had a threesome with her best friend and her husband? Just delusional.

Well written, but to f*cking sad to give it a 5. So, I'll give it a teary 4.

I find it mystifying that people think Greg was wrong to ask his "wife" to stop seeing her lovers. It is especially strange since so many commenters on this site figuratively pound their chests belittling everyone as cucks. Thought provoking writing. Thank you.

Was a great read and a well written piece. Was just wondering if there were any new developments in the tale since it was written a few years ago. If so maybe an update is in order

Some of the comments related to the “unfair” ultimatum are missing the fact that any chance to heal requires sacrifice. Greg would likely have to give up certain portions of his career. Alicia would have to cut her sexual partners out of her life. It’s not equal, but neither are the offenses.

Regarding the writing, I didn’t like the flashback/flash forward mechanism and change in narrator combination. It seemed to break up the framing of the narrative and made the reading a bit more jarring.

I do like your writing and it was a clever response to comments by framing it from your perspective. I further appreciate your realistic approach to the characters and situation. A solid story overall.

The last paragraph is a perfect summation.

IC69 hunters point of view reflects a dismissive view that a husband, or wife, HAS TO be willing hold a second string position in their spouses heart. If not, why our vows?

Marriage is a spiritual contract between a man and a woman. No one should try to divide it and both spouses should protect it with their life. IF that doesn't work the he/she should leave.

Well written. Congrats.

Greg was an ass with that demand. For almost anyone, that is an impossible and untenable choice. He deserved to lose her

Loved it. If the ,c was a real manager he would have been able to keep the home fires burninh yoo. That being said he might have still lost out to her friend.

From a previous post

"If he cannot do his job regularly in 8 hours per day then something is wrong."

This individual must have never had a position of very much responsibility. Even some of the positions I held while still in HS required more than 8 hours per day., much of it uncompensated.

There are some aspects of some positions that cannot be handled within the normal 8 hour business day. If you like your position and are seeking further advancement, you deal with them. There is also the mental and emotional aspects that keep the mind in turmoil, draining needed energy. If you are a mediocre employee, with no ambition and improvement if not essential for advancement, then by all means remain lazy and unconcerned and watch as the more mature vault over you and assume the higher position, and higher income associated with advancement. Not to mention greater respect from those aware of your attitude that your position requires an 8 hour day and that is the maximum you intend to invest. Most likely. you current superiors have already made that analysis. You might want to also consider a possible deeper recession and potential layoffs.

Working hard is the american credo, the mantra. Succeed at any price. There is a time for everything. If he cannot do his job regularly in 8 hours per day then something is wrong. The husband is to blame.

Makes me wonder if the problem hubby had getting her ready for sex was because Susie wasn't in bed with them. Seems like Alicia might be more left handed than ambidextrous. Well written, both of the chapters. And I enjoy Harry's comments on here.

I think I would like to see Greg rebound and relate to his kids. I think he owes his kids guidance that negates Alicia's influence. Also I would like to see the other three suffer more, I mean really suffer and be wrecked.

3 stars - second read.

I still think the SLUT was fucking the other couple more than just the two times she admitted. I also believe that she obviously loved the other woman way more than her husband. So much for her statement 'I would do anything to get you back'. Anything 'except' giving up her true lover.

The husband did what was best for him and flushed the SLUT.

The part that is the saddest in these types of situations are the KIDS - they did nothing wrong, but this will negatively affect them for the rest of their lives.

I’ve read both parts several times and it is sad. I do wish there might be a Part 3 to see how they moved on.

After everything that had happened, Alicia’s response is almost inexplicable especually considering her actions indicated in the epilogue.

Inexplicable unless her marriage to Greg was not the primary/central love relationship in her life. In retrospect, the dressing alike and other shared activities hinted at could be indicative of Alicia and Suzie signaling they were the primary couple and their husbands, while important, were but accessories to the relationship between the two women.

The fact that Alicia would break up the family of her children and husband so that she could continue her relationship with Suzie (and supposedly Dominic) shows which ‘family’ was more important and it wasn’t her children and husband.

The saddest story I've ver read on Literotica. Not why I come here. 2 stars

I would tend to think Alicia was not completely honest with Greg. She and Susie NEVER stopped being lovers after college and she probably had sex with Susie and Dominic a lot more times than she admitted to.

Alicia is a bitch who is self-centered and immoral. Thr sex with Susie and Dominic was bad enough to break the marriage. And clearly their marriage had serious issues and terrible communication. But Alicia is fundamentally selfish. She claims to lover her husband a d willing to do anything except sever her tors to Susie who reinforced Alicia's hostile attitude to her husband and helped bust them apart. Alicia would have made that choice easily if she loved her husband and meant what she said when begging Greg not to leave her. But she failed in thr only real meaningful decision she had. And she failed. Greg is better off without her. In a few years, Alicia will be a broken husk.

Alicia is a selfish whore, and Dominic deserved more than the concussion. Reality however tends to fuck over the good guy. I'm sure Greg got fucked in the divorce too, because that's what happens in real life; the guy gets fucked over 99% of the time.

I have two kids, a daughter and a son. The advice that I'm giving them in regards to marriage is different because of reality. I'm advising my daughter to get married. My son? Not so much.

Cracking story very well written i cannot fault it at all even the epilogue is spot on and echoes my feelings exactly. Greg wasn't blameless but Alicia should have told him she would leave him and find someone else to make her happy if he didn't sort himself out,i am sure that would have shocked him into paying more attention to her ,there was no need for her to fuck about like she did the ultimate blame was her over the top reaction.5star story all the way.

Sad part she wasn't willing to do anything the husband should have gone after the asshole one last time.

I've found that stories based on real events are much more interesting than fiction. Thanks for sharing. Hoping you have some real life event to turn into stories.

Great story. No way he could stay married to her and her still being friends with her friend and asshole husband. I'm sure she's still fucking the asshole.

Very good. Interesting, believable on all of problems, mistakes and end.

There is never an acceptable excuse for cheating or not putting your spouse first. Alicia simply didn't love her husband as a spouse should. The marriage was doomed long before the Halloween party. Alicia doesn't appear to be enough of an adult to have a sustained relationship. Greg certainly isn't perfect but Alicia is definitely the weakest link.

Retained his self respect as he had to live with himself. She was willing to do anything after she spread her legs.

had a job I loved once, paid me more than I was worth actually. Job kept me out of town for lengthy periods. The away times increased steadily and I quit. Facts are, absence doesn't make the heart grow fonder but does make the mind wander. Alicia has been driven in to the arms of a couple, loved it and will continue...end of story. Neither could find the ability to speak about their concerns or needs. I wonder why are they together at all. Greg should continue to drink heavily and feel sorry for himself. Eventually his drinking will cost him his job. Then he can get himself a tin cup and a "Will work for food" cardboard sign and spend the remainder of his life doing what he likes best...whining about shit that happens to him.

Greg still needs to get his issues worked out or he going to have the same problem with his next wife/gf

another dirtball wife!

Regardless of the blame both Greg and Alicia may have had in their deteriorating marriage, the fact that Alicia would not sever her relationship with Susie and Dominic (both of whom she had cheated with) means she has no business being married. If there was any debate about who was to blame for what, her inability to sever, which would be expected of anyone caught in this situation, is just repulsive. Greg is better off without her.

Rich was in a no win situation. A job that left him, literally, no time for his wife, children or even himself. To a real extent He is, in real part, hugely responsible for his plight. HE did not seek out his wife for help. He did ignore her in essence, in huge spheres of critical importance.

Alicia was in a no win situation as well. Alone, emotionally abandoned with no apparent hope for a better future. Complicating this is her lesbian relationship with her friend that SHE gave a value equal to her husband and marriage.

Given all these issues this is a marriage that was doomed.

The only possible solution would be for him to step out of the work pressure cooker, Alicia to get a part time job to help buffer the financial hit, INTENSIVE counseling and for Alicia to abandon of lesbian lover who she loved even more than her husband.

Just no way out of this to a happy ending.

Maybe the problem was that Alicia thought she was sex on a stick but a dud in bed. She expected her husband to put forth the all the effort and attention and her only job was to be worshiped. Perhaps Alicia was all about her needs but didn't give a crap about her husbands. Hell I've know women like that. Selfish in bed and selfish in life. They get off as many as time as they want but don't give a fuck if the guy does. You know they old saying about there's no such things as bad pussy...sure there is. Alicia is a prime example.

When it comes to reconciliation, the number one expectation of the person who cheated(Alicia) is that they cut off all contact with the people they cheated with forever. In this case that would be Dominic and Susie. No last meetings to say goodbye, just cut off all contact period. Alicia refused to do that. She was never remorseful about her cheating and tried to blame her husband. She still felt entitled and was not serious about reconciliation.

nobody win, just like in real life

Very good theme. Writer took story to logical ending and not because he was M/C friend. I see nothing wrong or causal about telling cheater to disassociate with Susie. I mean WTF. How could the husband re-develop trust? Still love Dom being dominated. Cheater project a true selfish character flaw. It came across defensive and “get over it”. M/C better off without her. On the minus side the writer should maybe develop a org. outline before next effort. story jumped a bit. Overall good effort and will read more of your works.

The lack of communication in this story is disheartening, Greg told Rich all of the issues he was having but not his wife. But in the end it doesn't matter, she didn't want to be married to him more than she wanted to have a fallback fuck with her best friend and her best friend's husband. The key issue was that Susie and Alicia didn't see anything wrong with what they did so why wouldn't they be tempted again when Greg was working too much?

He never told her about having to fire Frank the day of her birthday and being torn up about it, plus his Bosses forcing him too. OR, about the mentally and emotionally work days, her "needs" for long foreplay, multi positions, dirty talking that he didn't like.. Sounds like they never seriously talked to each other. All in all, once a cheater ?????

Well written. A good real life story. Realistic from the party to the end.The husbands reactions and choices (other than getting drunk constantly) where what would have and have gone down in real life. You tried to make him too good of a good guy by leaving the door open to reconciliation which was a mistake and nearly ruined the story. No Way would a man consider that in real life. This is fiction,but the best fiction is believable fiction otherwise it's fantasy,a fairy tale...good job,5 stars..JZK

Yeah that is a woman alright

Honestly Greg did the right and best thing for him. Anyone who thinks a cheating spouse should be allowed to still socialize with the AP or in this case the AP's is a fucking moron.

Other than the pathetic cucks here, imagine your wife fucking her best friend and her husband, and you stay with her and every other week or so she says "I'll be back later honey, Im off to visit Susie for the afternoon". Yeah, let that settle in and simmer for a bit. Unless your one of the cuck clique this is NOT a situation you would accept.

Too bad she loved Susie more than her husband, and as such he was right not to trust her going forward, they have a history of sex together, literally would have happened again. Im sure he's happy he had the kids but I bet he wishes he knew the real her before he married her.

As far as this "Susie still supports her friend, and still blames Greg for being unfair" yes because she refuses to accept her and her husbands guilt for ruining her friends marriage. Asswipes, and she is one, are like that. They never take responsibility for what they do and prefer projecting their guilt unto others. It helps them feel so much better about themselves.

Well done.

Sad but interesting story. She definitely wasn't ready to do "anything" otherwise they probably would be married still. Life goes on.

She married my brother after I threw her out and put him in the hospital. My family supported him so I left the state. I thank God that we never had kids, that would have made things so much harder. I'm living a good life now and I'm happier. I have no contact with them, but they have my information if they ever give me a thought. You wrote a very highly emotional story. You brought a lot of anger out of me. On a happy note, my brother still limps.

I wish we had an update on this where she burned and he healed.

Alicia was a horrible wife. She was deeply selfish and entitled. Quite frankly, while I can understand feeling neglected, ALL spouses feel neglected at times. If you do not communicate that fact then you ARE part of the problem. Yes, it's wrong to neglect your spouse but a marriage is a partnership. Sometimes you need to HELP your partner do better, even if it means telling them what they may not want to hear.

Her cheating wasn't about neglect though. Thats just an excuse people make when they believe their betrayal and harmful acts are justified. Its complete bullshit. Drunken tirades usually release inner feelings. What I read was her rage at not receiving the expected life of privilege AND total devotion and attention at her whim. Alicia is a classic cake eater. I do not believe for a second she respects her husband. If she did, none of that would have happened.

You are right in one regard, Greg is definitely better off without her. Honestly, even if she did break contact with Susie (which seemed extremely unlikely given the description of her friendship) I don't believe they ever would have made it work. As the saying goes sunlight is the greatest disinfectant. Alicia's behavior and confession would have resulted in the realization that she was a very selfish and petty person.

I hate women like her. They give the rest of us a bad name. Cheating is one thing. Narcissistic bitches are another.

Thank you! For me this story was running about a 4* story until the wife decided that there was no way that she could part with her friend. The reality of her being unable to choose struck me, now 5*'s, as real and no married person should be anything but first in the heart of the other.

Unrealistic and shitty perspective changes... 1 Star.

Good story but some conflicts with the wrong names in certain places

Well written, a truthful scenario that plays out in real life and you kept it realistic which made it easy to read..Now my opinion on the story line:.. The only thing I totally disliked is that he should not even given her a chance at reconciliation. He should thank his blessing she chose her friend over their marriage. Here is something many authors,husbands,boyfriends,you included tend to over look or simply not yet realised. Women tend to dress to attract and be desireable to the opposite sex,they DO NOT dress just for the husband/boyfriend like they like us to believe when going dancing or parties. I have called women/wives out on that when they made such a comment and from some reactions I would have been dead if daggers where looks. Some actually nodded in agreement and admitted looking sexy/desireable to the opposite sex not just to their husbands was important, how honest they where about this topic depended on whom was present.

Why write a story with that premise???

Shit I know men in 40s-50s who work long hours and gladly spend that amount of time with sex. Seriously wimpy guy!

Damn. That was pretty solid honestly. And yeah, those friends are fault. Very much at fault.

Well done

I have to tell you it's perfect story.

I can remember now once it happened to me not in all details in 2006

I'm also make the same request

I tell my GF me or your best.

And the same choice of Alicia she made.

Sometimes the lust life control the innocent people.

In 2009 they have car accident and both of them died 😞😞

Every time it's coming through my head I wish that I could kill this fake friend and safe my GF , but it's to late , that's left me I a hole in my heart untill now.

I'm curious to know what happened next few years for both of them , I'm really wish that she can realize that this toxic relationship with her best friend will drive her to a real miserable life , but what we can do , as I said something lust life have full control of the innocent people.

Really if you can told us what happened next years , I think most of the fans want to know what happened to them both.

P.S : I don't know really why my account is not working but once it work I will copy the comment under my account name and waiting for your reply.

There's a lot to unpack in this story. On the one hand you have a guy who prioritizes his job, and is too tired to service his wife, but he watches porn on a regular basis. I have no doubt that she felt rejected and pretty vulnerable. On the other hand you have a wife who cheated with not only another man but her best friend as well. Now I don't know if her level of inebriation in the first instance of cheating would be enough to be considered a rape, but I wish that the author would have explored that. To my mind even if it's not rape, Susie and Dominic took advantage of her in a very bad way. Why she wouldn't want to sever ties with people like that, well it makes me wonder if she might have codependency issues.

No matter which side you're on, these are too deeply flawed people, who didn't communicate. I honestly don't think they're marriage stood a chance, but that's just one man's opinion.

"I don't always want to be dad, or husband, or boss." - How many times do the cheating wives say that they're tired of being someone's wife or mother?

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"After a few weeks of feeling like the unsexist woman on the earth" - I'm sorry, I don't care how many times her husband has rejected her, there is NO way that she feels unsexy!

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"You want me to choose between my best friend and my husband? I-I can't do that Greg." - By not choosing, she IS choosing!

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"In my opinion, if that choice was impossible then Alicia wasn't in the marriage as much as a wife should be." - Yep!

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Not to be redundant, but she SAYS that she can't choose, but by NOT choosing her husband over her friend, she is in fact choosing her friend. Having said that, I don't think that a wife who TRULY wanted to reconcile wouldn't choose her husband. How that might play out in terms of hidden resentments, maybe even future cheating is open to question.

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@Maxxxstyles, good point, that if Susie was a true friend, SHE would cut off Alicia and tell her to go back to her husband.

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I was going to say what nonethewiser said, that MAYBE in a few years, she and Susie could GRADUALLY rebuild their friendship. There's even a chance that Dominic might be out of the picture by then!

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As others have said, if Susie was Stan, a dear male friend who was like a brother to her, would there be any question about cutting him out to save her marriage?

First part was based on real event. Second one is a mix of reality and fantasy. But now that time is passed I believe that the real story has reached its conclusion. I am really courious about the real outcome. Even if getting the permission from "Greg" to publish this one make me suspect that THIS conclusion maybe not very different from the real one. Am I correct?

Greg did the right thing by cutting Alicia loose. When a husband plays second fiddle to his Wifes best friend and her friendship is stronger than their marriage, there is no marriage period. I was routing for a reconciliation but that wasn't to be. So sad 4 stars

The wife is wrong here 1000 percent she wouldnso amything but give I thebfriwns ahe cheated qith amd expected him tonaccept that....0 trust the wife ia wrong evwn more thwn the husband. He shouldnhave not only kicked his ass bit sued them for alienation of affection. She loves her husband sooooo much she qould not drop her lover f her

should have gone a bit further with the aftermath.

They have "zero" communication skills. They're better off divorced.

The Wife can consider herself lucky that she didn't get treated by Greg like Tarzan did..... Offering ANYTHING and not being willing to sever all ties with her so-called friends leads to a foregone conclusion.... Well written!!

If I was a young man that thought his wife was hotter than MIchelle Pfeiffer and wanted me to take her there is no chance that I would skip it and jerk off to porn. If he neglected her this way - his wife asks him for sex and he is "too tired he needs to do something - like get a new job. And her birthday? WOW, what a deadly insult. And she still didn't go looking for sex, it found her and she was extremely vulnerable based on alcohol (easing the pain of neglect) and his neglect, which to me was emotional abuse (even though unintentional on his part). How much energy does it take to move your tongue around? "Honey, I love it when you sit on my face?" Or "It would really turn me on if you would touch yourself in front of me"? Take her just as she is ready to come and finish her off. While you look for a new job. It is not that he was medically unable or that he was shipped overseas against his will, it was his stupid job. So he put his job above his wife. Orders of magnitude worse than putting your best friend equal to her husband (still bad but understandable because of his emotional neglect).

Since I don't find female female action threatening, I would be fine with the two best friends getting together (without Tarzan).

So rather than ask her to give her up, she needed to come to their house. And he gets to be with her twice (and ask her for a critique). Compensation. And allow her to come over and be with his wife IN FRONT of HIM. Compensation. And take the wife after she is thoroughly warmed up as part of the deal. Seeing both of them naked frequently would be compensation as well.

Get a doctor to find out what is wrong with his libido.

Counseling definitely, they are both idiots.

She could have cried. "Don't you love me?" "Am I ugly?" "Why don't you want me?" Sobbing wife wanting to know why she wasn't attractive any more would have done the job. Not enough work on her part to get him to wake up.

Gripping though I hated the outcome - I wanted reconciliation with penance and compensation as detailed above. 5 stars anyway.

She choose her fucked up friend over her husband no wonder it was so easy for her to cheat on him. I think the only thing that Greg lost was his kid's. Sad

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When I read this five years ago I said I wouldn't rate it because it hurt too much. Now, because the husband did what he had to do, I give it five stars. What did the cheating cunt expect? Hearts and roses? I hate cheaters. Although the prick lover got his pain, the wife deserves more. Friend instead of husband? She deserves it.

Nice one. Hard to say which part is true and which fiction. Maybe they did get together after all.

Although I don't like most BTB stories, this one I have to agree with : when you're married, your spouse comes first. End of story.

Thanks for sharing.

Damn your a good writer , this story was the beat all - end all of emotionally charged short stories ! Well written indeed ! 5 stars easily

Great story. I hope Greg is doing better now. I have to agree that Alicia would had to end her relationship with Susie and Dominic. I hope Greg recovers and Alicia has a lifetime of regrets.

Gregg is a loser. He had a wife who was 'everyman's' dream. Brainless. In real life this IS what would have happened, one way or another. My opinion is they were in a crisis that HE caused. HE couldn't talk to her, couldn't give HER the time, but could get up in the middle of the night and jerk off to porn? LOSER!

5 stars.

The wife got exactly what she deserved - DIVORCE.

The husband got the shitty end of the stick.

The kids suffered the ramifications of their stupid, self absorbed parents.

So who won and who lost? Everyone lost.

The same thing happened with my parents - yet we all survived - sort of.

@InfiniteCycle Re: Susie, i did say it was a SLIM chance, LOL!

javmor79: fuck off.

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Perfect ending and totally relatable. 5/5

While reading I kept thinking “after that level of humiliation, reconciliation would be nearly impossible. To have any chance Susie and Dominic would have to be removed from their life completely and permanently.”

When she offered “anything” and then balked at no contact, I thought of something a wise old gentleman I used to know would say ... “Talk is cheap, but it takes money to buy whiskey”

To sbrooks103x.

Sorry, you're wrong.

The real threat to the marriage was Suzie herself. Tarzan was just a convenient dildo.

Suzie was the important one to Alicia, and Suzie also slept with her.

That there is betrayal and contempt.

No getting past that and still seeing the bitch.

It being said that this second part is fiction...

...if the choice she had to make was real, and the outcome from that is real, then the divorce was the right path.

She wasn't in the marriage for him. She was in it for herself, only. As long as all the parts for neatly in her reality then it would continue to work.

That she chose to betray him with her friends instead of communicating, and coming to an understanding of the dynamics of her own relationship, meant that in actual fact, he really didn't matter, as long as she got to eat her cake, and keep it as well. And the plate.

I wonder what she would’ve said if he insisted on going to bed with Susie She would’ve given her up as a friend

That is really sad. But I agree with Greg if Alicia didn't love him more than Susie then she didn't really love him. Alicia's love was conditional and no marriage can survive that.

On a writing note a typo - Greg became Richard for a part of the story when Greg was talking to Alicia on Richards veranda.

I really enjoyed reading this 2-part series. My heart broke at the end over Alicia’s decision to end her marriage because of selfishness. Would love an update in 5 /10 years. Thank-you.

Totally agree with the authors epilogue, if your in a marriage than your in it 100%, the most important people in that marriage and your life for that matter, has to be the husband and wife and of course any kids that belong to the Marriage. Friends are just that friends, they are not family⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Just reading the comments, just a thought about one very SLIM way she might have saved the marriage without dropping Susie: Only see Susie with Greg. No going over to Susie's house alone, even if Dominic isn't there, no GNO's with Susie. MAYBE shopping trips, as long as they end up back at Greg and Alicia's house.

Fuck that bitch...whether it was fantasy or not. Choosing your friend whom, you had as affair with over your husband. The worst part is He now has to pay alimony and child support so that she can keep on being a hoe with her underachieving hoe friends. Now that is the fucked up part to all of this.

He could have got the option to fuck Susie twice a month, as long as Alisia and Susie remained friends... since he was, and would continue to be the injured party. That would have shoved it up Tarzan's ass a little also.

Great story, BTW...

Two more self centered bitches than the law should allowed. When Alicia couldn't sever the relationship with Susie, then Susie should have pushed Alicia away. Dominic was just a dick attached to an empty head so ignore the dick head. But if Susie was a real friend then she should have convinced her friend to end there toxic relationship and work with her husband to keep the family together. But they were two selfish, self centered bitches, that wanted every thing there way. To bad Greg didn't see it before two little girls were conceived to a couple that were destined to not last

in the long haul. Greg wasn't able to communicate to his wife his problems and Alicia wanted her love making to be soft and last into the wee hours of the night.

Note to Javmor79: I like your writing style but when you say a story doesn't have an ending yet because it hasn't happened yet and then you published part 2 ten days later and that story has "Now, a year later, wounds still run deep." That stretches the truth factor. Still I enjoyed it even though I didn't like Alicia choosing Susie over Greg. I would had a higher respect for her if she would have at least tried to make it work and it failed. The biggest failure was in note trying.

What a great story!

A 5* sequel to a 5* story.

I usually support reconciliation when young children are involved. But, where wife cannot sever a relationship with her friend and friend's husband, who she fucked, then there is no real chance for marriage to survive. Just think of having a party where wife would invite Susie as her best friend and Dominic comes along. Can't do.

I can see a guy spending five minutes jerking off a opposed to spending 45 minutes on foreplay to spend another hour on sex after working a 10 hr shift

I'd have hired a hooker to fuck Tarzan and send his wife the photos

But not to his wife...but her love for Susie was greater than for her husband...the father of her kids......what he did was a no brainner..........