All Comments on 'Caught'

... especially for a first submission. You have captured this scene very well and I hope that 'inspection' will be with us soon! Welcome, new author, and thank you for a marvellous, five-star introduction to your writing skills.

Please write the rest. WOW

It made me cum so hard. You're a good writer, and have a very creative imagination! I only wish my math teacher would do this to me ;)

Really enjoyed the story. For a first story this captured the imagination! Keep up the awesome work.

Please write more!

Loved it! Looking forward to the inspection :)

More please!

Finish the damn story please.

This was lackluster and the entire second half of the story I couldn't focus because all I could think about was the insane UTI this poor girl would get

I thought it was very hot, up until he started piercing her. A little intense, and super distracting from the main event. Imo it would have been better without that

Pull back on the unbelievable stuff and It can be a good story. You don't have to be ridiculiusly cruel for non consent/ force/ etc.

pierce the clitoris if you want to. I wouldn’t recommend doing it the way our protagonist had hers done, but it certainly is possible.

The story. Agreed, unbelievable stuff (piercings, plugging the vagina for any length of time...) however wonderful con/non/con.

I mean, that's rape and he left proof of said rape, she can easily get him put away lol.

Soo good