by auraya
Interesting fantasy, well thought out storyline, happy ending. :-)
Even your grammar seemed good, unlike some authors here.
Your writing has even inspired me to post a few of my own.
Keep up the excellent work.
thank you just right for a first time together with a well known friend
Very hot he was in control but not violent made it very sexy I love the set up everything made for an excellent story I wish it was a novel so I could keep reading it
Great writing! But I also loved the names of your characters. Same names as my Master and I. Lol