All Comments on 'Caught: A Totally Ruined Afternoon'

Enjoy your work. This was your best yet! Nice erotic fiction.

You bet it was a ruined afternoon. You were lucky to get out of there in one piece. I guess you had no choice to suck, but I wouldn't go near that bitch again. What a bitch. Excellent story.

This is without a doubt you best story yet and I have enjoyed most. This was professionally written with a real plot. I felt yet pain. I've imagined being caught but this took that to new level. You have a talent and I look forward to more stories penned by you.

Great job on this very erotic story. It's so very hot.

We lved this and all the twists and turns. It is one of your best. I like Jamie Revenge a lot too. Love the way you tell the story. Some great out of mainstream ideas. Keep up the good work.

I guess this is my worst fear, getting caught with a guy by my husband. But you ready got screwed Rob. Really. This was a hot story and I couldn't figure out what was next. The ending was priceless. Such a very hot story!

This is the second one of yours (maybe the third) where I did not like the ending at all. I read to be entertained, not to be disgusted or disappointed. A man is fucking a woman and then ends up like this. I think I will just skip the rest of your stories, I was reading all of those on your page. Your stories to write as you please and my choice to not take a chance of being disgusted and disappointed again.

A wonderfully sexy tale. So many twists and turns. Too many times it is wham, bam, thank you mam with no consequences. This is a perfect non consent story. Great job. Love all your work.

Great story. My only complaint (such as it is) would be that I wish it had been longer.

This kind of story I can't enjoy, because I can't relate to or identify with anyone in the story. Not the psychotic husband nor the cowardly MC. I would die before disgracing myself like that.

Timeto go cop hunting

Call the papers andtv give the name of the cops and wife then a good lawyer retirerich as fuck