All Comments on 'Caught by Flatmate Ch. 03 - Thorough Control'

Very Good story line but more grammatical development needed. There are so many similar sentences repeated when Armaan is denying his fate. That makes the story boring. I suggest involve more fetishes such as bondage, chastity, forced cross dressing and stockings and panty worshipping etc. to make it interesting for more readers. Please continue

Thanks for your comment. I already started work on to include more fetishes in my story, but I really thank for your suggestion.

Loved your story very much. My favorite stories are from the start , when the Goddess/Mistress first takes control until she finally breaks the man . I hope you will continue with more of this story

i loved it. Sara is definitely a darling Goddesses. So caring for Her little slave. Such kind words. I had dinner once with Mistress and it went very much as you Sara treated Armaand. Wonderful.

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