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All Comments on 'Caught by the Rain'

by i_would

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trace_ekiestrace_ekiesover 10 years ago
A fun read

I like dialog. I enjoy having the characters talk about themselves - what they are doing or what they have done. This was particularly well done. Believable and readable!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Normally 'conversation' stories sound forced and do nothing for me. Yours however managed to be quirky without being crass. Well done.

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