All Comments on 'Caught Ch. 01'

it was so hot while reading.. ,heat raised thru me

A very interesting and tittilating premise. It was a fun read. Had my cock hard and leaking precome the whole way through. I think you are dead on about why guys masturbate. We don't need much reason, but stories like this are a good read sure add to the list. Keep it up, it sure keeps mine up.

But do give us more! Helluva good start!

Can't wait too read what happens when Deb enters her little brothers bedroom the second time. I'm kind of jealous of Jake. LOL.

makes me remember first time i saw my little bro. cum

when i walked in on him.

Apparently everyone reading this story so far lives in a fantasy world. Might want to try and add some realism to your writing. You had a good start, and a good storyline, but a guy cumming that many times?? Come on...you're either a virgin 18 year old...or a virgin 40 year old...if you think that is what happens.

Duh, it is fantasy. That's the point of the piece. Read a little more carefully next time. There are some subtle and not so subtle hints to that end.

Doesn't everyone fantasize. Don't you ever fantasize. Too bad if you don't; you are missing out on another way to enhance life and sex, whether with someone else or with yourself.

Thank you for the initial complement.

Have fun.

And to the anonomous commentor that doesn't think a young man can come more than 3 or 4 times in a short period... Speak for yourself... Hell, I'm an old man and I can still come 3 and sometimes 4 times in short succession... And I'm damned near 60...

Couldn't believe how hot I got just reading a masturbation story!

Great first chapter.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Exciting AMAZING

lots of story left. please continue.