All Comments on 'Caught Ch. 01'

Please get a good editor. There are a few grammatical errors & a couple of spelling mistakes.

I would love to have girlfriend like that what fun and games made to feel like a slut

Loved it.

Why make the girl so violent and the cock so unrealistic to point it will damage a normal person

wheres chapter 2 ?

it had all he elements, but seriously, you kept the room locked. how did she know. was it easier to confront you like she did, or talking with her? rule of thumb: if it sounds too good to be true etc.. .I darn sure wouldn't trust this creature. pack her bags, kick her out. and don't let her take any pics, I sure wouldn't put it past her for blackmail.

Got me all excited. Read well, can't wait for part 2

I have not seen many wonderful written couples stories on this site and was glad to come across this one. It really brings out awareness and should teach, men especially, to be open to self exploration with themselves and open exploration with their partners (regardless of male or female). I can't wait to see more.

Gorgeous. From this bi curious guys perspective, it did it for me.

Chris

Many guys think they have secrets but women usually know. Many ignore it but some confront the guy and take the appropriate action. Good job.

I wish something like this would happen to me!

You have touched my fantasy - more please

Fantastic, you've got to tell more. My clitty got hard reading it!