All Comments on 'Caught Ch. 01'

Ok, wondering where you're going to take this. Obviously his wife (soon to be ex) and her parents have been pulling the wool over his eyes for their entire relationship. Why would his mother get involved with her daughter-in-law's father who is still (happily?) married? I can understand a one time mistake, but why would she repeat? It looks like he can't trust his mother also ( at least for several months, if not years) - time to make sure the videos are backed up repeatedly. Also time to get a new cell phone on a new plan so he can't be tracked (burn the videos to DVDs also). His mother may be able to redeem herself and partially fix their relationship ( of course it will have to be after his marriage is officially over, and it may be a LONG time after that. Maybe mom will finally get to meet her new daughter-in-law and grandchildren - when the grandkids are in their teens!) Enough ranting - looking forward to part 2 etc...

This was too outlandish and ridiculous to have any semblance of verisimilitude.

You need a sequel. Please tell me that the guy doesn't hurt himself but found someone that has his values and he has a good life!!!!!!!!!

I just keeps getting deeper and deeper around this guy. It John’s nailing Granny too, I’m out. I’m reading to see how much incest you can put in a story and still call it LW. Why did he not kick John’s ass too?

Ouch! That was one hell of a betrayal!

Looking forward to him getting some payback on all these assholes.

have to see how this turns out

While I'm liking the premise of both the new stories. Stopping there just spoiled the flow of the story hopefully we don't have to wait too long for the next part.

part 2 please

complete the story soon. too short. your record for part two is not impressive either.

Please DON'T complete the story, what you have so far was a complete waste of time.

Got some family issues there, dude? Post your shit in I/T.

Great start of a different twist for a LW story. Now, don't mess this up by having him join in the fun. Let the readers watch these people burn as they should... 5* for Ch. 1

This story gets 5/5 from me and definitely requires further chapters. This tale can go places.

Please Familyguy1963, more additions to this great story.

There is a section for incest.

Pretty sick but you write good enough to keep my attention.

I certainly hope this incest isn't promoted and the wrong doers get their well earned pain.

A slightly different introduction to the cheating scene, but not all the same a good one. You just have to accept incest. I'm looking forward to a sequel. And it works without offending the readers! Well done!

I don't care if there are more than four pages in a story. My attention span is better than that. Just post the whole damn thing.

more anal or incest category than LW. No mother would have sex on her sons wedding bed the day of the wedding. If she wanted that guy so badly get her own room.

Wrong category... plus it sucked . You sir can eat 4 of my used condoms

Good start.

Hmmmm, two recent stories that have a chapter 1 and no chapter 2?

You really need to complete this story as well as Long Hot Summer.

Good start. Looking forward to the rest.

this has got potential, theres a good story here, looking forward to more of this, dont know which way it will go but im hoping he dosnt join them all, thanks for sharing and realy looking forward to part 2.

sequel please. Love both your new stories.

Man that’s a lot of ass fucking!

"mortified that my wife's anal fucking had made my cock rock hard and fully erect." - I don't care how "mortified" he is, any husband that gets hard at being cuckolded, IS a cuck!

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Ass-to-mouth? Eww!

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The dialog is beyond ridiculous.

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I agree, wrong category, needs Incest, with LW and Anal tags.

That was the fastest end to a incomplete story .

As with Long Hot Summer, the driving force of this story is the Incest.

What, the chapter number in the title was too complex for you?

And, yet, it was exactly what it looks like.

Ditto what Bebop posted!

Just a POS story. Sorry. Everyone had to have seen what was coming.

And seriously does any man actually say "spunk"?

Biggest issue is that you're in the wrong category. You tagged this story as Incest. It certainly is that and belongs in that category. Second biggest issue is that it's completely unfinished. He has a confrontation with his Mother but what about his wife and mother-in-law? What happens with the divorce? What about the assault charges his father-in-law will file? Too many unanswered questions.

1 star

A very incomplete and frustrating story.

No real plot, character development or reason to continue. Please stop or post in Incest.

Forget the complaining shits and carry on writing your own story.

Is this supposed to be a comedy? I laughed out loud several times. Not sure if that's the reaction you were after.

This is only a teaser not a complete story.

Dip shit writers that doesn't finish the story

"Don't you just love"

Dip shit commentators who don't know how to write properly.

One sentence, eight words, and you couldn't even get that right!

Honestly, what are schools teaching these days?

Sorry, I write when I am able to make time. All stories will be continued/finished. Patience.

So,where is chapter two.?

Finish the fucking story

Good story so far looking forward to the next chapter

Any further news on fresh chapters?

Please finish the story.

Will be a chapter 2?

Chapter 2?

Hope to see a chapter 2 and hope its not him reconciling with his family but either way look forward to a second part.

needs a ending

chapter 2 has to be better than this. Father in law needs a good kicking.

My god! Some of the dialogues were extremely hilarious! Almost like a Jesuit priest writing them! Which woman being buffered up the ass will say words like ‘ make me your sodomite ( I had to look that one up on dictionary) slave!!!!!!

And which mom says ‘ bigger your daughter’ what a laugh riot!!!

It has been months and you have written and posted other stories since. You should finish this before going on to something else.

Hoping for a chapter 2, to find out what he does to his in-laws, wife and mother

Please BTB THE WHOLE LOT OF THEM

Well I would have kicked FIL several times between his legs. Definitely.

Needs a chapter 2.

Where's the rest of this fucking story?

Finish the story

Second story in 2 days of anal incest both label ed chapter 01. Fortunately both were mercifully not extended to chapter 2. 1*

Never going to have a 2nd chapter.

I really enjoy your writing and would love to read a chapter 2.

Any chance of a second chapter?!

1 star - just so you are aware, I never start reading a story unless I know it is complete.

So please don't post them here until they are - thanks.

I don't see the turmoil.

His mother was a complete slut for his FIL. His FIL is also fucking his legal wife. Where is the turmoil? I see two ruined families. No suffering involved. He will leave both families. He may or may not use those recordings to completely ruin their reputations. But he'll be fine. And they will simply move far away to escape the judgement, after they are legally dealt with of course.

There is no ambiguity here. No pain from indecision. What they did was evil. He understands that, and is completely cutting them outta his life. It's less a turmoil and more a tumor he's surgically removed.

Finish the damn story

would love to read chapter 2

Author can't seem to be able to finish any stories. Another 1 *

Isn't there some law against having anal sex 3 times in a day, unless you are Gay?

Deeper Daddy," my wife was pleading, "I've missed your cock in my ass. Pump all your cum into my asshole and make my anus your own. Mummy and I love being your sodomite slaves

Seriously? One speaks like this in the throes of passion? Looks like the writer never experienced this.!

In no way is this a LW story. It’s just a nasty attempt to put incest into LW.

Oh I do hope you have a follow up to this, nicely set up I like the way you have written it with good descriptions and characters.

Does any author on this site know how to end a story?

you gotta add more to that one.

Plzz give us ch.2 gotta see him get his revenge

While I would also like to see where this story goes, the chances of it occurring are slim to zero.

The author has not submitted any further stories since 2021. (sigh).

This does not exclude the number of other stories previously submitted that needed further episodes.

I would hope, under these circumstances, the author is still well, health wise.

Part 2? Pretty please?

The way he was writing if there is a part 2 I feel like he's either going to make him a cuckold or willing participant. I hate those stories so please don't do that to this one if there is a part 2. Give the MC a backbone

Can always hope one of the other authors on LIT takes up the banner for FamilyGuy1963.

While this story could end here, there is also the hope the FIL will be exposed that guy is one sick puppy!