by Awful Arthur
This latest adventure in sex from AA has it all: plot, sex, and plenty of both! The dialogue is rich and earthy, definitely reminiscent of something unrehearsed. Well done. Thank you for the steamy read!
You handled the conquest of Maxine like a general during field exercises and she was captured and subdued well. Great writing, keep going.
I really liked the way things turned out....It reminded of my secound marrige. damned good.
I like how he straightened Maxine out. I especially liked how he filled her tail end with his load. Awesome! 5 stars.
That was so in depth and I loved the whole thing, wish I heard even more.