All Comments on 'Caught In The Act'

I usually love your stories but had a hard time with this one. I feel like everyone in this story is a horrible person. If I was the son, I wouldn't touch Mom with a 10-foot pole for health reasons.

The story seem too rushed I wish the son would have being so understanding so quickly

"And with your father's profession, it's not something that is common knowledge" I looked at Barry. "We would like to keep it that way." I told him.

Then maybe you shouldn't be '...fucking two guys on stage while a damned crowd watched'...

Kind of hard to be discrete *and* a total slut...

Um, is this finished?

Please, oh please, do a followup chapter for when dad gets home!! Five stars and a favorite point!

HOT. Can't wait for DAD to Cum Home!

so wrong, so strong, so long! amazing!

Amazingly well written.... Makes me wonder if it's fantasy or not it's so well done.

Had me thinking about Tracey seducing me and how things started with us.

I wish I could tell our story but fear I'm not talented enough....

Nope, not for me.

The family that "sticks" together!!

I was totally engrossed in the story. I stroked my hard cock then matching the story I slammed my rubber cock deep inside my own asshole. Within minutes my cock was splurging my hot cum onto my chest. I LOVED THE ENTIRE STORY. KEEP IT UP so I can can shoot more Jim then eat it off my fingers.

Please continue!!! Fucking great start!!!

Another great story. 5 stars. The sister seemed like a bit of an afterthought though. Would have liked that angle fleshed out a little more. Oh, and you got the days mixed up on Dans Denver trip. Still fucking hot.

Wimp

Need the rest 😫 NOW....lol amazing story

I thought it was hot and hope you can add a chapter after Dad gets home. Here are 5 stars to help make up for the first comment who thought this was a Docudrama!

Cheers

SAGE

Love to get another chapter if this with Barry and Dad double teaming the sister or bring in a strap on so the women can be three hole sluts

This needs a part 2. Soon

Seemed like an interesting story but the mother seemed like an ASS. Thanks for sharing this work.

Very nice changeup from the usual incest fare, I like the rules being set ahead of time in particular. I'm pretty sure the breach won't be a problem with the lovely gift from the family in video format.

Wasn't sure I liked the story at the beginning but it grew on me. Now I'm hoping you will make at least a second chapter. 5stars

Awesome story!

Hope you add to this one. It needs more to it.

Going for the ultimate cuck story?

Yep, definitely demands more...at least one more chapter...maybe more. The whole 'family that plays together' thing...I LOVE IT!!

Kelly is NOT a 'surprise last minute addition,' as another reader commented...BUT she is a welcome one! I agree, she needs to be a three-hole slut like mom, and made to be air-tight by her loving family!

Five**5**Stars....to encourage you to write more about this family!

more please

You need to write more of this! I'd love a continuation 🙏

I really like your stories but a little punctuation would be nice...

part 2?

Please no another part I thought this 1 was going to be better than what it was I really didn't wanna read about a family of whores and that's what they were you completely ruined the bond that is supposed to be between the mom and son and the brother and sister bond as well

Excellent story, man. Nicely constructed, great imagery. Loved it, thanks.

Ok so no wasn't cheating but the husband is a pathetic cuck ass bitch who isn't no man and the mother is a slut who fucks god knows who bareback no damn telling what she has in the way of std which means I wouldn't touch with 100 condoms on I would still be too scared to touch her the son isn't much more a man than his dad he sure did become a little bitch after seeing the video instead of sticking to his guns he should have said sure not cheating but you're still a fucking slut and showed no respect to her or his dad after that shit there was no likable characters in this pathetic of story

Decent start of a story, but a very weird ending? It could benefit from a part 2.

Ok that one needed a bit more for the explanation to dad and the roundhouse that followed.

Oh wow!!

Hope you have a part 2!

Son "catches" mon??

A bit over the top, even for this genre.