All Comments on 'Caught in the Crossfire Ch. 06'

Only just caught the later chapters since its moved.

Well written, realistic and believable.

Two large errors though.

The chapter started with several weeks having passed since she discovered his name and then she says last week when buster mentions it.

This has been going on for several weeks, must be a minimum of ten...that's 30 grand payed. So how can the barter price have started at 25k.

Minor in the run of things, but worth fixing.

I had been enjoying this series up til this chapter.

Now you’ve introduced more guts you have totally spoiled it, for me at least.

I’m out.