All Comments on 'Caught with Consequences Ch. 03'

I want to hear what the mom's say too. I so love when you mix characters from various stories

This was definitely will writing story love everything about it.😘😘😘😘😘😘💋😘😘😘you are very very good . Sad it was the end. Can't wait to read your next story 💋💋💋💋💋💋🤡🤡🤡🤡💋💋💋💋💋

Kelsey is a person from your executive Solutions story set.

You sure spun us with that 360 at the end.

Not what we were expecting and we can not wait to read more about all the characters.

A great adventure!

5 for all 3 parts

Kelsey sounds like Cassie, and Reka is Bulgarian for River. At least that's what I learned from Natalie in Executive Solutions. Wonderful stories MN.

Executive solutions it was Cassie's alias

Keep up the good work. I did not subtract any points but:

Ending good have been neater and tighter and not rambled on.

Keep up the good work!

a great story full of the most repulsive and yet endearing characters, you hid the plot to the very end with that twist, thank you, look forward to more of your writing

needs 1 more chapter

I absolutely loved your stories. You're the best. :-)

A couple of loose ends. 1. What happens to Amanda Palmer. She just walks off into the sunset scott free from her phony rape charge. She does mention her next mark but nothing is ever heard.

2. What transpires when Kimberly gets home for the meeting? Enquirering Minds want to Know! The story leaves us hanging.

Michelle you've done it again. I really liked it. Turn about is fair play.

As always Michelle, you deliver in a big way. So much so, in fact, that if you were to remove the more descriptive sexual sections, and flesh out the major plot points and combine all the stories that encompass our main characters, I am positive that you could have a very publishable book on your hands. I would buy a copy for sure.

Another good story well told XXX

It is an excellent story with a twisting plot, a few unexpected twists, concluding in betrayal. As entertaining as the story reads, I agree with one of the anonymous commentaries that a final chapter could bring the drama to a different satisfying conclusion.

This was a great read in for all three parts! The factual details really pull the story along! I will wanting an epilogue with details of Amanda's crash, the IT guys rebirth to make up for his sins, and exactly how Kimberly either cleans up or crashes as she has zero middle ground left. Michele, I adore your heroine's humanity, they love, lose, laugh, learn, fail, fall, adapt, and persevere. So much of reality is making it through the crap until small victories finally add up to enough. Your characters get that!