All Comments on 'Caution! Slut in Training'

by smudgebucket

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malay_malemalay_maleover 17 years ago
Start a series

Great start for a possible series =) Keep on writing..

BuzzboyBuzzboyover 17 years ago
Like it so far

The scene in the movie theatre could have used more work but other than that a good story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Your story

Your story has been reviewed. You can see the review on the New story reviews thread on the Authors' Hangout here: http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?t=428901&page=11&pp=25

Any comments or questions pertaining to that review can be directed to that thread: http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=18265130#post18265130

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
slut in training

Nice story - needs further chapters for definate - possibly with the pupil being shown the ropes !

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More needed

Like it - could be a good series !

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

This is a great start, I'd love to read the rest

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Kudos!

I am really not into the LGBTLMNOP thing, but I enjoyed reading your story. It was nicely written with good mechanics that make it easy to read. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing!

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