All Comments on 'CC - Universal Remote Pt. 01'

This is a great story and has so many different ways that it could go. This has the potential with many chapters to go to be one of the best on here. The ways of control, the mother and sister, and the ways it can lead to multiple different scenarios. Only the I would add or ask is more details….actually size of tits, what the pussy looked like, what his cock looks like(hopefully larger and fatter than the fathers). Things like that

Nice start

concept has potential, Chapter was way to short. Your writing isnt very creative. No imagery. All tell and no show. I hope the next chapter shows improvement.