All Comments on 'Celtic Mist Ch. 09'

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Comentarista82Comentarista82almost 2 years ago

Aoife and Declan indeed did cross paths once. I remember thinking that when he decided to go to Dublin if she had also? Now we know! This is the one time this kind of interlude of a chapter is well-placed, as now it explained why Declan never saw her until 7 months later--she was in the convent for 6!

You detail her doubts, thoughts, pain and grief quite well, to the point we feel her doubts, vacillations and conclusions. 5

Horseman68Horseman68almost 2 years ago

Best story found on this site for a long while. Exceptional writing and history work by the author.

Crusader235Crusader235about 3 years ago
Thanks

Thanks so much on filling us in on how, and where Aoife survived. We was worried about her. Five Stars.

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