All Comments on 'Celtic Mist Ch. 11'

Truly gripping :)

I'm loving your story so far! The historical detail is so impressive! I particularly like the addition of the poems/songs interspersed throughout. Irish history is so fascinating and this story is doing such a great job setting the stage for the Irish Rebellion of 1798. Based on your other stories I'm sure we'll have a steamy sex scene after all this tension and interrupted gratification. Can't wait for more!

Oh, the injustice of it all: she has Blaylock in her sights, but she must wait; then she spies Declan and her mind continue substituting him into all of her feverish and sex-fueled dreams--only stoking her desires further. However, this chapter showed 2 visits to the secluded forest and Declan only spied her on the SECOND visit. I'd love for her to discover that Declan shot both creeps in the balls, so she knows he defended her honor.

Torture for the characters, but you equally vex us as readers! 5