All Comments on 'Celtic Mist Ch. 13'

Very grateful for the regular postings thank you

How many parts more to go. Getting difficult more to keep a track

Thanks to everyone for reading and for the feedback. There are 3 more chapters to go: two for 'passion' and one for 'vengeance'.

Nooo Anonymous, the length of the story is wonderful, and the chapters come out regularly. If you're having trouble following the story wait a bit until all the chapters are up and read in one sitting.

Wow.

You passed on the same befuddlement Aoife felt to us as readers, as she pondered how best to interact with Declan next.

Loved the intense and extreme-risk oral administrations Declan gave to Aoife. That was bold indeed! I would have never guessed he would have tried such a thing. How they kissed under the church was very understandable.

You detail the emotions and situations so well and her internal conflict perfectly. 5

Getting a bit tiresome reading the same parts of the story from several different perspectives.