All Comments on 'Celuna's Hunt'

very powerful story. you're able to show love, sex, and use the werewolf deal very well. wonderful piece, one of the best i've read.

Wonderfully written, any chance of a second chapter?

You should write more to this! I like the concept and the characters!

I wonder what will become of Jacques?

I was really impressed with the characters and creativity of the story. If your wrote a book I for one would buy it.

Sensual, sexual, great character development - I wish I had Hunter in my bed.

Thank you!

Nicola

I loved your story. I read a lot of novels with similar concepts and yours could easily make a fantastic book. With Jacques and others, you could even create a series. Or at least another story here. It seems there are many of fans besides me who would read them in a heart beat.

Hot, erotic, steamy and very moving. There were parts where I was actually in tears. I love your work! keep it up!

If you want to post arround twenty stories with the same plot as this one, i guarantee ill read all of them. Absolutely gorgeous!

i really like the plot and story, it was great! i think you should write a story about Jacques, and also one about the parents, Cleona and Remy. :)

Where is jacques story?

The authour did such a fine job of catching the emotions and background of the characters. Made them full and breathing people.

Well done.`

WHAT A STORY- DON'T STOP NOW! THIS IS CHAPTER 1, ISN'T IT?

Great story! you really pull the reader into it.

That was one of the hottest things I've ever read. Honestly, SO well written.

I thought this story was absolutely brilliant!!!!

I Loved it! It was absolutely brilliant, by any chance are you making another sequel?

Well written! I LOVE IT!

Poor Jacques though. You should write a story about him if you haven't yet...

that left me breathless. I just stumbled apon this story, It's the first of yours I've read. Delighfully well written. (*except the last page, which didn't go through editing- which I can understand if you were as caught up in the writing as I was in the reading.

You use the language beautifully, and the words you choose arouse the senses. A very good novella

A brilliant well written story. Very enjoyable read.

That was a fantastic story. Thank You for sharing your talent with us.

Great story. I hope it continues.

Please write about Jaques and how he falls in love please. Loved the story

about werewolves. It's nice to see a werewolf story that isn't all about blood and guts. It's nice to see the other side of werewolves. I hope you make this story line into a serie. {Wolfmann}

awesome story and characters!

Great characters! Steamy and thrilling without going over the top....please continue! How does Hunter adjust to pack life?

I absolutely loved that the women were strong and tough. This was full of humor, passion, & incredible build up. You have a gift for storytelling. This is my first time reading it and I enjoyed it!! Keep up the great work!

That was fantastic.:-)

I really enjoyed this one. Thanks!

How cute. I liked that. Just a short little story.

So many ways you can go with a story like this. It's so hard to find a good LONG story... any chance you'll extend this?

*a good editor might be a step in the best direction*

I liked this one... there were a lot of typos towards the end but I got through them. I haven't checked your other stories yet but I'd like to see if Jacques finds his... I'd so laugh if he found a mate that frustrated the hell out of him.

Keep it up. ^.^

i loved the ending! that was just great!

I do have to question your terminology for werewolf - I believe the French Canadian term for this is Loup-Garou the plural of which is Loups-Garous. The English term that we're all familiar with is, of course Lycan or lycanthrope.

Having said that, I would love to read more...

your story was great. but wait a minute are their parents aroused by watching her fuck another wolf? and about to have sex watching her? man thats just WROONG.

the ending was excellent, as the strength and passion shown- would love to read more in Your werewolfe universe

(use whatever terms you like)

It showed the conection between parents and daughter and i thought it was sweeet and spicey at once

Please don't stop, this story can go so much further

Just loved it. You should definitely continue with this story or write more stories like this. Love Celune's character and ofcourse Hunter's. You're a great writer. Would love to read more of your stories. Don't come across to many gifted writers these days. You are definitely gifted. Thanks for sharing and PLEASE write more :)

i couldnt stop laughing when hunter said his name. you wrote a story about triple h. props to you it was a good story and i liked that you put him in there. also another funny thing triple h played a vampire in the third blade movie

Loved it. A few grammatical errors but it's still enjoyable. Definitely shld consider Jacques's story :) Keep on writing.

please continue this story or tell Jacques'. Inquiring minds want to know...more!

So when is the next chapter coming out????

I tried but this is some stupid shiit. Once again proven how dumb wolves are.