All Comments on 'Celuna's Hunt'

I tried but this is some stupid shiit. Once again proven how dumb wolves are.

So when is the next chapter coming out????

please continue this story or tell Jacques'. Inquiring minds want to know...more!

Loved it. A few grammatical errors but it's still enjoyable. Definitely shld consider Jacques's story :) Keep on writing.

i couldnt stop laughing when hunter said his name. you wrote a story about triple h. props to you it was a good story and i liked that you put him in there. also another funny thing triple h played a vampire in the third blade movie

Just loved it. You should definitely continue with this story or write more stories like this. Love Celune's character and ofcourse Hunter's. You're a great writer. Would love to read more of your stories. Don't come across to many gifted writers these days. You are definitely gifted. Thanks for sharing and PLEASE write more :)

Please don't stop, this story can go so much further

It showed the conection between parents and daughter and i thought it was sweeet and spicey at once

the ending was excellent, as the strength and passion shown- would love to read more in Your werewolfe universe

(use whatever terms you like)

your story was great. but wait a minute are their parents aroused by watching her fuck another wolf? and about to have sex watching her? man thats just WROONG.

I do have to question your terminology for werewolf - I believe the French Canadian term for this is Loup-Garou the plural of which is Loups-Garous. The English term that we're all familiar with is, of course Lycan or lycanthrope.

Having said that, I would love to read more...

i loved the ending! that was just great!

I liked this one... there were a lot of typos towards the end but I got through them. I haven't checked your other stories yet but I'd like to see if Jacques finds his... I'd so laugh if he found a mate that frustrated the hell out of him.

Keep it up. ^.^

So many ways you can go with a story like this. It's so hard to find a good LONG story... any chance you'll extend this?

*a good editor might be a step in the best direction*

How cute. I liked that. Just a short little story.

I really enjoyed this one. Thanks!

That was fantastic.:-)

I absolutely loved that the women were strong and tough. This was full of humor, passion, & incredible build up. You have a gift for storytelling. This is my first time reading it and I enjoyed it!! Keep up the great work!

Great characters! Steamy and thrilling without going over the top....please continue! How does Hunter adjust to pack life?

awesome story and characters!

about werewolves. It's nice to see a werewolf story that isn't all about blood and guts. It's nice to see the other side of werewolves. I hope you make this story line into a serie. {Wolfmann}

Please write about Jaques and how he falls in love please. Loved the story

Great story. I hope it continues.

That was a fantastic story. Thank You for sharing your talent with us.

A brilliant well written story. Very enjoyable read.

that left me breathless. I just stumbled apon this story, It's the first of yours I've read. Delighfully well written. (*except the last page, which didn't go through editing- which I can understand if you were as caught up in the writing as I was in the reading.

You use the language beautifully, and the words you choose arouse the senses. A very good novella

Well written! I LOVE IT!

Poor Jacques though. You should write a story about him if you haven't yet...

I Loved it! It was absolutely brilliant, by any chance are you making another sequel?

I thought this story was absolutely brilliant!!!!

That was one of the hottest things I've ever read. Honestly, SO well written.

Great story! you really pull the reader into it.

WHAT A STORY- DON'T STOP NOW! THIS IS CHAPTER 1, ISN'T IT?

The authour did such a fine job of catching the emotions and background of the characters. Made them full and breathing people.

Well done.`

Where is jacques story?

i really like the plot and story, it was great! i think you should write a story about Jacques, and also one about the parents, Cleona and Remy. :)

If you want to post arround twenty stories with the same plot as this one, i guarantee ill read all of them. Absolutely gorgeous!

Hot, erotic, steamy and very moving. There were parts where I was actually in tears. I love your work! keep it up!

I loved your story. I read a lot of novels with similar concepts and yours could easily make a fantastic book. With Jacques and others, you could even create a series. Or at least another story here. It seems there are many of fans besides me who would read them in a heart beat.

Sensual, sexual, great character development - I wish I had Hunter in my bed.

Thank you!

Nicola

I was really impressed with the characters and creativity of the story. If your wrote a book I for one would buy it.

I wonder what will become of Jacques?

You should write more to this! I like the concept and the characters!

Wonderfully written, any chance of a second chapter?

very powerful story. you're able to show love, sex, and use the werewolf deal very well. wonderful piece, one of the best i've read.