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I realise Its a story (I hope).

But… the premise is a little off somehow.

He has the courage to tell the transformed girls and especially the Cult-teachers that he would have liked to remain a man. Then during all this training Im surprised, he could not get to a knife? I would have taken out the smug “prophet” with No regrets!

Now… retribution will rain down on him, and because he spoles the truth, he will have severe restrictions imposed on him.

Therefore: the premise is off because he’s making several “tactical” errors (and he was supposed to have been a CEO?) - but… as a story Its a good start …