All Comments on 'Ch. 01 Pop Quiz'

the rest for the 'gee golly wiz' aspect of self-discovery. I personally hope to see more from this author.

Great Start! Always difficult to write from another person point of view and a great start here! More to cum!

This is great!! You are a hell of a writer!!

BQ

Pretty good story, but if you are realy the girl on the picture on your Litaotica page, you must have lissened very good to a man telling about his expiriences as a boy, for that is the way, and the point of view from with, the story is written. It might even be a true story, although I can't immagine a boy not masturbating much earlier than at eightteen. I am sure I did it myself when I was only three or four and without the help of porn of any kind although I had to wait until I passed my twelfth birthday, before I shot my first wad of cum.

So if the story is true there's just one mistake. The people in Pawnee, Oklahoma are all lagging behind the rest of society not by a good 3 years, but by at least six as it come to sex.

So, I'm stormygirl, I just forgot how to log into this thing. Anyway, somebody commented that I'm either a guy or really well informed... well I was really well informed. Actually the subject matter is kind of my fetish... first times & innocent guys :) So there ya go. That's why I wrote this. Thanks for all the feedback, be it written 6 years ago & all.

That was a nice first try to write an erotic story stormygirl.

But the "Ch. 01" at the start of the title left your other readers and me with the expectation of more to come and now it's almost 11 years since you posted this first chapter we've started to doubt if you will ever meet that expectation and show us you improve yourself as an erotic writer by gaining experience just doing the writing.

Please, give it another try and I promise you I will submit my scond story soon too. (my first story was posted 'only' last year).

Ed