by Wilson Spalding
Wilson Spalding is rapidly becoming my favority Literotica writer. Well versed, descriptive, believable and interesting characters. Their is subtle humor, especially in some of the banter between Jane & Rick. Everything to make you care about the players - and then the sex sets in and you feel like you are there.
Hot, hot sex, with a VERY willing and dirrrty girl. Jane is a wet dream come true - built for sex, toned and taut and ready at a moments notice. Could you ask for anything more? Yes - she's into being his slut, and will spread it around for him.
Keep up the terrific writing Wilson. Sure, many readers will give you grief. That's THEIR problem.
Yes Rick have a woman that loves him, and fantasize about him with out hangups. she get kinky just enough to pleasure him. They have fun doing it. I don't what will happen 10 years down the line, they are living out their fun with each other. I love the kinds of sex the have.
Please don't allow others to control what you write! You are a very good writer and your story is great. Too many comments are by wanna-be editors who want what THEY find interesting. I doubt if this couple's adventures are headed for cuckholding. Watching....maybe. They are enjoying themselves in whatever way they're headed. I love the classiness of the story and enjoy his bringing out her "inner slut." Keep it going until it slips into the best debauch ever.
You know - you are good - sensual and entertaining - but please don't involve others unless it's swinging - cuckolding or watching will ruin it for many of us - respect youself, us and your story.