Ch. 5, Retribution

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"Well, good. I wouldn't have to hit her." My Laura.

"Thank you, honey." Can I call you that?

His fingers were moving back and forth across her scar again. After watching him she put her own hand over his to hold him to her. Then she looked up in the mirror to his eyes and they looked each other in the eyes through the mirror. She moved a hand behind her back and took John's cock softly and stroked it up and down and felt it grow more. They weren't talking anymore, but he turned her toward the bed and walked her there. He lay her down softly and they sexed. It was almost like making love. Just about exactly. Slowly. For a while he had her spread her legs and used his hands on her, going back and forth between her thighs, being careful with her bruises, then up and down through her vaginal lips, softly and slowly, then faster, and finally he entered her. Who knows? he thought. And Laura? When they were finished, she held him and cried and wished she could undo all the hurt. She'd flood the world if she weren't careful.

When they were calm again, they held each other and John touched Laura all over. "We'll figure it out somehow." He thought a minute while he caressed her face, then continued, "And we need to get you a therapist."

"You mean the marriage counselor?"

"Someone more specialized. Maybe she can recommend someone. You're too fragile. We need to get you stronger." Then, "Maybe get me a therapist, too."

"Why?"

"When I punish you, I like it too much. And when I think of you and George together ... well, you shouldn't be around. I'd like to hurt you."

"You're being nice now."

"I'm not focused on you and George right now."

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silentsoundsilentsound7 days ago

Second time through and this was excellent! Still full marks.

Laura was simply a real rotten piece of shit at one point in her life. Her husband gave her a purifying fiery punishment that burned a lot of her shit out of her and allowed her penance.

I would like to see a spin off about Melissa Hirsch now though!

Delightful tease author!😆

DessertmanDessertman7 days ago

I started off liking this tale but the punishment/abuse was a real turn off.

Overall I rated it 3.

ttt59ttt5912 days ago

That was a tough one. I can see how the monster was living in him and the violence that it brought on, but it was hard. However, you pushed through and brought them to a better place. I don't tend toward reconciliation, but it seems right here. Thanks for writing.

H. JekyllH. Jekyll19 days agoAuthor

To Anonymous on April 25th, 2024. People like you are why I wish everyone signed their comments. You make a number of points. I frankly agree with you almost entirely. You get the chapter more than most readers. But we can't have a discussion because -- you're anonymous. You'll never even see my reply unless you just happen to re-read the comments, something very few do. But I appreciate your sending your comment.

HJ

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

I liked it. To all of the nay sayers, you forget the pain he'd been dealing with. Add in that George had killed himself, so he wouldn't/couldn't share John's pain. His pain was real, and he had told the counselor that he wanted to hurt her, maybe even kill her, but not kill her, but rather helplessness. The counselor was the one who suggested he look into Dom-sub style relationship, so he tried it to help him get control of himself, as he was thinking of himself as a "sucker", and he needed to get some strength back. Rather than a Dom-sub, he chose a BDSM style of approach, until he woke up and realized he was hurting himself too. I thought the author did a great job of expressing John's feelings, along with his thoughts. Granted he's still a cuck to a dead man, he is getting his wife to understand things.

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