All Comments on 'Chains (The Untold Christmas Carol)'

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smy3thsmy3thover 17 years ago
Beautiful story

And very creative. Left me wanting to hear more.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Eerie conversation!

A destitute Charles who hates Christmas meets a ghost who quickly fills him in on the nature of ghosts and tells him about a mysterious lady ghost named Estelle. After an encounter with Estelle, Charles hates Christmas a lot less. Well Written! Enjoyable read.

Good Luck in the Contest!

TE999TE999over 17 years ago
Nicely done

Interesting take on the famous author. Now we know how he got the idea for Marley's ghost. Good luck in the contest.

sacksackover 17 years ago
well written.....

You kept my interest throughout. Good luck in the contest!

RogueLurkerRogueLurkerover 17 years ago
Great story

with a very an interesting twist on things. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent!

This is an increbily brilliant twist on how Charles Dickens could have come up with his idea for A Christman Carol. Brilliant owrk, creative and insightful!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Nice script

I really like the story...It was like new concept for a hollywood movie... Keep doing the great work...

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