All Comments on 'Chalk'

I don't comment much, but this piece was worth commenting on. Bravo.

Thanks for the great submission. I really enjoyed it and liked that, for a change, it wasn't full of instant sex. The promise of things to come...

This is excellent writing. Well done.

nervous, hesitant, scared, anticipating, excited, determined, relief,

god I need cigarette and a drink

maybe he will return the favor. Good story--I enjoyed it.

This could be the first chapter of a multi-chapter series. It appears these two might just hit it off, and there could be an exciting, erotic, follow-on.

Good luck in the contest.

Very compelling. Nice to see you writing

This is sketched with attention to the flow and movement of the story. It captures both the experience of the model, but also the ancillary emotions of the art students. Well drawn characters.

In all her years of modeling, my wife's otherwise private orgasm was noticed only once, and to relieve the awkwardness the artists gave her a round of applause. I was fortunate to be there that evening and see it myself.