All Comments on 'Challenge 02 - Heather and Monica'

fantastic chapter, can't wait to see where it goes next

I hope part three will have her do a challenge that may get her pregnant!

Super interesting chapter!!!! Keep them coming!

Always a pleasure to read a new chapter and a good one !

Definitely not the direction I expected this story to go in but I enjoyed it just the same. Nice build and great payoff.

I just couldn't stop reading, Heather's second challenge. I love a good read and Challenge 02, was one of the best yet. Keep on writing about Heather and Harley.

Great plot. I'm looking foorward the next chapter.

5 stars, loved this chapter.

Great stuff, hope Harley gets her first!

Great start. Let’s see Monica enjoy a while before the baby bump. Perhaps a visit to Izzy for some jewelry. Antwan’s for a dance? Harley showing her off, sharing? More shows. A trip England then a visit to Levy?

Great, I hope Harley takes her a long way. Gets her black cherry. Antwan's club? Izzy for some jewelry? Perhaps Levy in England at one of his clubs? The Cockpit for a little pregnancy risk?

Good. More please.

I’ve revisited Jessica. Looking forward to heather or Monica trying some of those places. Who will emerge? Looking forward to lots of challenges, prior to and perhaps after she is BMW achieved. Maybe a little more story

Excellent story. I love the slow build up leading to the turning of a white bitch to BBC.